Monday, May 25, 2009

Self portrait

Self Portrait

My hair looks like a brown swirl of fresh melted chocolate.

My eyes are soft like a brown bears fur.

My smile is like a sparkling reflection by the water side.



By P.G
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3 comments:

  1. Craig SteedMay 25, 2009 at 7:15 PM

    "My smile is like a sparkling reflection by the waterside", that is such a wonderful description - a great similie! Well done P.G

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  2. Pam ThompsonMay 26, 2009 at 2:58 AM

    Hello P.G. I love your description of your smile - you definitely have a way with words. Well done!

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  3. AnonymousMay 26, 2009 at 3:06 AM

    I love your similes.And you are right. Your smile is like a sparkling reflection by the waterside. Keep up the good writing and share with us again.
    Mrs Reid
    Hamilton

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