Monday, May 25, 2009

My Self-Portrait



My hair is as spiky as a sharp knife in the kitchen cutting a tomato,it feels like a broom waving against my hand.

My eyes are a pile of mud in a rugby stadium getting squished by a black rugby ball.

My smile is as bright as a star and as red as a raspberry.

By S.F

(Image from http://www.rugbystore.co.nz/future-all-black-rugby-ball.jpg)

2 comments:

  1. Wow your class has been working hard, these similies are fantastic.

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  2. SF
    You are a writer and a rugby player. Maybe your future is as bright as your smile.
    Cynthia Manion

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